Critical Reading and Writing 2006

BAndOenKZZZZZ...

Bandung is my beautiful home town. There are many things that can attract you when you go to Bandung. Such as many restaurant in North Bandung which provide good view. Not only good view , but also the cleanliness. [give real example of the restaurant, and the cleaness] Today almost in Bandung’s road is ‘nt found any rubbish. Because the government has a new program that rubbish must be put out on its place. And to separate them into different categories, like organic, non organic, plastics. [ this will not attract me at all, you should write something else, this is irrelevant]
In the past , Bandung was called the city of flower. Imajine that a city which called like that , it must be really beatiful city. Now Bandung has changed but the plants, the flowers, the spirits never change untill now..[ this does not make me visit Bandung]
Come n Visit Bandung…

Jati

posted by Franky @ 9/27/2006 09:37:00 PM