Critical Reading and Writing 2006

My comments

From the text we can take a conclusion that Indonesian migrants aren’t taken care. There are many problems that they face. At least there are two things must be changed. First, the government should tighten the law. Today almost half from the total amount Indonesian migrant are illegal. When the accident happens, the government doesn’t have authorization to protect them. The migrant thinks that illegal way is easier and cheaper. The government must educate them to do base on the right way. With education, government can give explanation about the rules and the consequences.
Second, the service must be increased. It means that government should pay attention after and before the migrants work. When the migrants come back to the airport, there are group of people that persuaded them to exchange their money with certain money changers. Those money changers surely give them with the low rates. If it happens continuously, the migrant will be loss a lot of money.
So there are the points that government should concentrate to increase the migrants’ prosperity.

O.K.

posted by Franky @ 10/10/2006 11:00:00 AM