the reason
if i return to time when i choose SBM, it's quite confusing. Because it's just a simple answer. I just want to have a college that can improve my knowledge in management and business and also it's not far from my area now. i looked to this point of view and i think SBM ITB is the best choise for me. Beside that, I try to search some testimonials from my friends about some of the college in Bandung, and the result make me feel more sure. SBM ITB is the best choise for me.
'i' is always in captital letter.
CRW
The reason why I choose SBM is my brother’s recommendation. A lot of advices are told to me. At least there are two things that attract me. First thing is about the period of time study. At SBM we study only about three years, othes faculties are about four years study. I think if we graduated faster, we would have more time to work or learn something new outside the lecture. Second thing is about the materials. SBM’s materials adapt with Indonesia culture. So in the future we won’t feel strange , as we go to society.
Your writing is using a lot of spoken expression.
CRW
SBM is the best bussines school in Indonesia so
i choose SBM as a place to study.
SBM have good
facility that support me to study.
SBM have a good building, the building is complete with the auditorium, tutorial room, library, and student lounge.
Of course SBM have good lecturer with S2 and S3
graduated.
Many SBM program teach us
from experience learning like, bussines games, excursion, IBE. Beside bussines lecture,
SBM give us interesting
program like performance skill, this program teach us how to behave in front of our bussines partner. The lecturer teach us
from playing drama, acting.
From all the advantage of the SBM,
i'm sure SBM is the best school to study if you want a be a succesful person.
Your grammar please!!
